Can someone help me fix my sentence?

i have made some sentences in Korean, and I am not sure if they are grammatically correct. help me please.

1. 雮?雼れ嫓 牍勳晞雲鸽ゼ 旃橂嫟 鞁滌瀾頃挫殧.
(I am starting to play the piano again.)

2. 鞕滊儛頃橂┐ 甑愴潿鞚?鞎呺寑鞐?頂检晞雼堨姢韸鸽鞃?
鞓る敂靺橃潉 頃挫潉瓴岇殧.
(Because I will audition as pianist in the church's band)

3. 攴茧嵃 雮?鞕柬幐鞚?鞎?鞛橂唨鞎勳殧.
(But, my left hand can't play well anymore.)

4. 雮?鞐办姷瓿?鞐办姷鞏挫暭 頃挫殧.
(I have to practice and practice.)

*** I know my Korean is worst. Please help me correct it.

the Korean sentence is what I am asking. not the English one.

1. 頂检晞雲鸽ゼ 雼れ嫓 旃橁赴 鞁滌瀾頄堨柎鞖?
(I am starting to play the piano again.)

2. 甑愴殞 鞓れ紑鞀ろ姼霛检潣 頂检晞雼堨姢韸鸽 鞓る敂靺橅晿霠り碃鞖?
(Because I will audition as pianist in the church's band)

3. 攴鸽煱雿?鞓る灉毵岇澊霛检劀 攴鸽煱歆€ 鞕检啇鞚?鞛?鞎堧敯霛检＜雱れ殧.
(But my left hand can't play well anymore.)

4. 瓿勳啀 昃胳頌?鞐办姷頃挫暭瓴犾柎鞖?
(I have to practice and practice.)

Your grammar and punction are fine. Looks Good to me.

I don't really know Korean....

Sorry.

Have you tried a Korean dictionary or something like that?

I don't really speak korean, but it looks ok to me :)

There are spelling errors and grammatical errors all over the place. Don't you have a tutor that could help you face to face? It'll be better for your learning.

your engrish is perfect

You got it Perfect my korean friend at work read it and she said "you did it perfect"

1. 頂检晞雲鸽ゼ 雼れ嫓 鞁滌瀾頃╇媹雼?
2. 鞕滊儛毹?甑愴殞鞐?頂检晞雼堨姢韸鸽靹?鞓る敂靺橃潉 頃╇媹雼?
3. 攴茧嵃 鞕?靻愳澊 鞛?鞎堧徏鞖?
4.鞐办姷鞚?毵庫澊 頃挫暭 頃╇媹雼?

you put the words above in translator right? even if you were bad at korean, you wouldn't possibly think of saying korean like that.

雮?鞝?雼れ嫓 頂检晞雲鸽ゼ 鞁滌瀾頃挫殧.
鞕滊儛頃橂┐ 甑愴殞 鞎呺寑鞚?頂检晞雼堨姢韸鸽靹?鞓る敂靺橃潉 頃犽牑甑殧.
攴茧嵃 鞖旍鞐?鞝?鞕检啇鞙茧 鞛?氇?斐愳殧.
鞐办姷 毵庫澊毵庫澊 頃挫暭霅犼矁 臧欖晞鞖攡~

haha i suk too thats ok

雮?or 雮橂姅) 雼れ嫓 頂检晞雲鸽ゼ 旃橂ゼ 鞁滌瀾頃挫殧.
(I am starting to play the piano again.)

2. 鞕滊儛頃橂┐ 甑愴潿鞚?鞎呺寑鞐?頂检晞雼堨姢韸鸽鞃?br> 鞓る敂靺橃潉 頃挫潉瓴岇殧.
(Because I will audition as pianist in the church's band)

4. 雮?or 雮橂姅) 鞐办姷鞚?頃挫暭雽€鞖?
(I have to practice and practice.)

氙胳晥. 雮橂弰 頃滉竴毵愳潉 鞎勳霃?鞛?鞎婍暣.
(Sorry I still can't write korean very well either)

Haha Sorry I tried. I'm korean and my grammar is crappy. >.<